Well done guys! You have used all 3 techniques correctly and incorporated an interesting story. The first few shots are well constructed (eg canting) and intriguing to watch, and the arrival of Keelan's character is surprising and interesting. For the thriller work, be wary of using effects like you've used here - they can confuse things and appear less, rather than more professional. You use the shot reverse shot technique creatively, and it's noticeable that you don't return to a shot of Scott's character when he speaks. If this was a deliberate decision for meaning, you would need to explain it very carefully here on the blog.
Well done guys! You have used all 3 techniques correctly and incorporated an interesting story. The first few shots are well constructed (eg canting) and intriguing to watch, and the arrival of Keelan's character is surprising and interesting. For the thriller work, be wary of using effects like you've used here - they can confuse things and appear less, rather than more professional. You use the shot reverse shot technique creatively, and it's noticeable that you don't return to a shot of Scott's character when he speaks. If this was a deliberate decision for meaning, you would need to explain it very carefully here on the blog.
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